Editing to Teach
http://www.stc.org/confproceed/1993/PDFs/PG179181.PDF

Sartoris, Brenda E.
STC Proceedings
1993

Abstract:

Authors often are unreceptive to editing because they see editorial comments and changes as arbitrary. Editing that offers “rules,” asks questions, gives choices to authors, and provides examples of better ways to express ideas takes very little additional editorial time and enables authors to see editing as a significant contribution to document quality. Writing problems that cannot be addressed during editing can be addressed in brief training sessions that encourage authors to incorporate what they learn into their writing.